Here is the story reference I am using for my short film. What I like about it is the story arc. It begins slow, gradual, like we're going to discover something. However the ending is rather abrupt and not very exciting. Right now I'm left saying, "is that is?" Why not have the bird fly out the window? Or the bird sees its reflection in a mirror, is frightened, and flies back into the clock? Give me excitement! It needs to be bigger. Maybe a larger/deeper meaning in the end?
Title: "Mazout Bird"
Work Cited
VFX, Grid, post prod. Making Of Mazout Bird. http://www.grid-vfx.com.
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