Split Screen Script

I found a couple of ways to trim my length down. By doing this, I managed to shave off 10-seconds from the previous version. Here is my updated files:

The Body Shop, Running Time 49 seconds (in PDF Format)
The Body Shop, Running Time 49 seconds (in Word Format)

I still need to cut down on my run time.

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To day I am prepared to present my proposed script for my final project. I have discovered that after carefully estimating run times for some of my shot sequences, my duration is greater than 30-seconds. Therefore, I need to find ways to either remove some sequences, like setting up the establishing an environment, or decreasing the length of time allotted for a sequence to complete. Perhaps it isn't necessary to have the transition shot of a bustling NYC street into a little boutique? What will my music samples be for my sequences, and how will they transition from one scene to the next? I'm still in the process of brainstorming these issues.

The Body Shop, Running Time 59 seconds (in PDF Format)
The Body Shop, Running Time 59 seconds (in Word Format)

Enjoy!
Rp